Wow, alright that is outstandingly better Thank you for that! I don't know if I should edit the drawing for the artist or if it's too late? I'll ask her. Thanks so much again! I feel kinda dopey as much as poor Sarah looks now
I rarely pay attention to OC ponies but this beauty is outstanding. If the work had been more refined the I probably would have put this in my "spectacular" collection. (Was pretty tempted anyway.)
First off, I love the wonderful face, shapelier eyes with cute lashes, being so big and expressive and curious; combined with the smile she's clearly very happy, and the wider shape of her head and seemingly larger ears make her much cuter than most OCs and perhaps even some of the regulars. Heck, I have to stop and wonder what's caught her attention.
Great work on the pose and view pint, with great shading and foreshortening. You worked in that sweet "heart stroke and brush" cutie mark quite nicely while creating an interesting pose, natural and relaxed. The shading looks wonderful across her white coat, again giving the feeling of depth and body shape wonderfully. Then, her silvery mane is just gorgeous, playing so nicely against her white body with its vibrancy. Better yet, it's a little mussed up, like she's been out playing, bouncing around, just having a great time. And what could be better than that?