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This is a sketch of Lox I turned into something kinda cool today P:
I don't draw him enough for the fun of it. I really am liking this character the more I write about him.
Not too proud of it but a critique would be nice!
Short Re-Cap On Lox:
Spent most of life in preforming Mageek as an entertaining mageeshun. His shows mainly featured in throwing projectiles at objects, uncooperative smeets, plain targets, Vortians and various other living organisms, with general accuracy.
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He isn't the most amazing at it, but some of the OTHER things he does is pretty cool. That, I will hope to reveal in my comics, if I go far enough. Like a cooler thing each round. I had an EPIC idea if I had got to the last round, but I doubt I'll get use it, ho hum
I could do something else with it I suppose.
Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Lox by *enigmatia
I don't draw him enough for the fun of it. I really am liking this character the more I write about him.
Not too proud of it but a critique would be nice!
Short Re-Cap On Lox:
Spent most of life in preforming Mageek as an entertaining mageeshun. His shows mainly featured in throwing projectiles at objects, uncooperative smeets, plain targets, Vortians and various other living organisms, with general accuracy.
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He isn't the most amazing at it, but some of the OTHER things he does is pretty cool. That, I will hope to reveal in my comics, if I go far enough. Like a cooler thing each round. I had an EPIC idea if I had got to the last round, but I doubt I'll get use it, ho hum
I could do something else with it I suppose.Irkens © Jhonen Vasquez
Lox by *enigmatia
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© 2010 - 2024 enigmatia
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Overall Vision Originality Technique ImpactThe first thing coming to my mind looking at this artwork is how accurate you dealt with the use of colours once more.
Wait, first things first.
First of all: general proportions, posure and stuff:
I love the posure here. It looks dynamic, the way Lox stands there is more casual; dynamic+casual=cool
In this case it really does look cool!
I like the hands most, once more; the way he holds the shuriken in the right hand and especially the left hand which just threw the other weapon.
Cause for criticism would be the right arm and the flying Shuriken. The arm looks as if it was too much at the back; as if Lox should turn his shoulder backwards - which he doesn´t. This makes the whole arm look a little strange. I hope I explained it in an understandable way; I am not very good at such things.
The shuriken: if you stood in front of a person throwing one, you would only see a line before getting hit painfully, right? This means, if Lox is able to throw it correctly, you should see a little, just a little less from the side of it, it would appear "shorter".
Ah, maybe it´s just a question of taste, but I would draw Lox´ teeth a little wider on the left side (from the viewer´s point of view); he looks a little...ehm...stupid like this. Just a little! I don´t want to insult him...^^
The colouring:
...you are the colouring-queen!! As I said, the colours you used here fit together as well as always; the background is quite simple, yet awesome, setting an epic mood!
The reflections and the shading make me drool, particularly the hand´s shading is great and makes it look really plastic! Waaahh, wonderful!
All together this artwork is not your best, but it still looks great!